Your 1st ehh, not too bad. But you made several mistakes, which i’ll help you fix. So right now i’ll have to give a low rating, i’ll increase it after you fix the level.
-Level too small, increase the size of the level, and remember not to make it Linear (going in one direction).
-Too much of the same weapons, lower the amount of weapons you have.
-Spread out the weapons throughout the level.
-Eye Candy needs improvement, look at the levels: Castle1, & Battle1. Use your Eye Candy like how they did or be creative!
-Lack of tiles, try to use as much tiles in the tileset as possible.
-Event shortage, add more events! You can use stuff like food, powerups, but don’t use shields!
-No start position, that’s a problem. Place the event ‘MP Start position’, or you’ll get an Access Violation in Multiplayer.
-Filename way too long, just rewrite the filename (not the level name).
-Don’t put an official level as your next level, instead link the level up to itself. Type in (your rewritten filename) in the Next Level box of Level Properties.
Alright that’s about it, good luck at improving! Ok Jman I guess I was a little low then a 2.2[This review has been edited by JJ Tublear]
Elliot
Posted more than 20 years ago
3
Originally posted by JJ Tublear:
-Level too small, increase the size of the level, and remember not to make it Linear (going in one direction).
-Too much of the same weapons, lower the amount of weapons you have.
-Spread out the weapons throughout the level.
-Eye Candy needs improvement, look at the levels: Castle1, & Battle1. Use your Eye Candy like how they did or be creative!
-Event shortage, add more events! You can use stuff like food, powerups, but don’t use shields!
-No start position, that’s a problem. Place the event ‘MP Start position’, or you’ll get an Access Violation in Multiplayer.
-Filename way too long, just rewrite the filename (not the level name).
-Don’t put an official level as your next level, instead link the level up to itself. Type in (your rewritten filename) in the Next Level box of Level Properties.
Ooh! No layer three so it looks cool out the windows! 1.5 for that!
1st 0.5.
All of the stuff I kept that JJ Tublear said: 0.0
Overall: 2.5
Jman
Posted more than 20 years ago
2
HoLLa! HoLLa!
UM….ok…newbie….I can tell that you are a newbie if you rate this level a 9.0!
LOL man get a grip….anyway JJ Tublear…..I think about a 2 MAN…..GIVIN’ CREDIT TO THE NEWBIE HERE….MINE WAS WORSE THAN THIS! =p PEACE OUT!
-Jman
Newbie
Posted more than 20 years ago
Newbie thinks level is great! But he rates it extra good anyway, because Newbie is feeling kind today!
(Trafton is removing the rating, as Trafton thinks that this rating is annoying. Trafton also dislikes it when people talk about themselves in third person. -Trafton)[This review has been edited by Trafton AT]
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