well chris…you ovbiously have good ideas, I like them, but you definitely have to work on your eyecandy. Work on the eyecandy a bit and you will be an excellent levelbuilder.
jazzaberry land
Single player, by chris11,
requires 
The Secret Files
Description
This is my first single player lvl it is a bit small.It was no password so you can edit it a will but not say it’s your lvl
Contains 1 Files
 Peacful war.j2l |
Jazzaberry land | 5.00 kB |
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Paul Posted more than 20 years ago
aiko Posted more than 20 years ago
Well, i dont think “jazzaberry land” is “a place where nothing goes wrong”. Actually a lot of things went wrong, like major tile misplacement(!) etc., the kinda boring Diamondus layout and the authors attempts to put some eyecandy (back layer!).
But hey, if it’s your first level, i’m sure you will able to improve your level skills step by step. Could need time but its worth it. Unfortunately i can’ t give a download recommendation for this level. Don’t worry, chris11! (Very High three points because its SP and there are some good ideas and even trigger crates)
P.S.: Background music is not included and the next level setting is missing.
Genotoxin aka iCeD Posted more than 20 years ago
I’m in agreement with Aiko here, there was lots of bad eye candy, bad tileplacement and such. The Diamondus set is pretty easy to use, too. Download of this is not reccomended. Despite this, though, the level has nice use of ideas and a trigger crate. chris11, you have potential. Keep working and you’ll eventually get a very good rating. :-)
I should also note that you should ALWAYS include a next level setting.
SPLASHcc Posted more than 20 years ago
Well, its his first.
its looking better than average for someones first lvl, but there are major displacements and stuff.
most things arent finished good, leaving strange, weird tiles behind on top of more tiles, if ya know what i mean. big fun were the sparks (dude i have NEVER seen em till now, but i think thats becus i never make 1.24 stuff). but things are too far away from each other, or too close to each other. try to find balance in your lvls. also try to make good eyecandy like flowers, and mountains and all the stuff you can imagine.
looking at the explanation of the lvl (a land where nothing can go wrong) i personally would have chosen for the psychic tileset, but thats just my opinion so leave that outta this.
to all ppl out there practice making (single plyr) lvls first before you post em on j2o or any other site. dont be content too fast and always look in a critic way to your work (or let others do that). you will always find things that dont fix or things that should be added. help from others is good too. and look at the standard jazz lvls too for examples. and then finally, your work is done and can be put on j2o. but let people test it first, so u can make any last fixes!
mrplonker Posted more than 20 years ago
Not my favourite level by far.
There is bad tile placement and almost no eye candy!
Oh dear
this needs a lot of improvement, but as a first it aint bad, and the trigger crate idea is good!
GAMER(CR) Posted more than 20 years ago
sHORT, DULL, AND EASY LEVEL, MUSIC NOT INCLUDED
SINCE ITS YOUR 1ST LEVEL, YOU GET 5.