mortalspaz
27 Mar 2009, 16:13 (edited 28 Mar 09, 11:41)
1
This Level is tooo short,to linear and those layers were barely used(4&8)
Do not download…
In one place I’ve got stuck, but i didn’t jjk i used jjfly & jjnowall and i survived
sorry 1.2
Lark
Posted more than 20 years ago
3
Here goes.
Eyecandy: 3.0
Not very good at all, much of the eyecandy work is incomplete, or doesn’t go along. Nothing special, either.
Enemy / Ammo Placement: 2.0
Very bad. You can take on all the waves of enemies with one kick, and there is no ammo.
Originality: 5.0
Done much in the style of “Another Story.” You are reading half the time.
Bugs: 3.0
Well, considering the fact that you can walk right off the side of the map and get stuck on the bottom, I couldn’t give you a high rating here. Also, there is no end of the level.
13/40 = 13 × 2.5 = 32.5 = 3.25 (I’ve all ways been known to make up my own math rules, like you just saw, and it really bugs my teachers).
Anyway, 3.25, rounded down to 3.2. Make more of the level, get rid of the bugs… make the text punctuation good (it’s all lowercase, no periods, etc.).
Nice try, though, keep practicing, and take more time on your levels.
DanYjel
Posted more than 20 years ago
2
Layers&Eyecandy: 20 %
Gameplay: 10 %
Level design: 40 %
Event placement: 20 %
Bugs: 20 %
Size: 20 %
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20 %
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- 0.2 tileset is not included
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1.8 >>> 1.7
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SPAZ18
24 Jul 2006, 14:07 (edited 26 Jul 06, 09:22)
1
Wow! This is so not good!
FUTURE OF JAZZ REVIEW:
EYECANDY:
Not enough is used. You only used Layers 4 & 8. 1/10
GAMEPLAY: This is just far too hard and I fell off coz I didn’t know where I was going. There’s only 1 level. 2/10
PICKUPS:
NINE RE-GENERATING 1UPs at the beginning. Bad idea. NO WEAPONS! 1/10
OBSTACLES/ENEMIES: There are way too many enemies in this level. No weapons so they will be very hard to kill. 1/10
MUSIC: Bad choice of music. Tubelectric is not a very good choice to go with this level. 1/10
TOTAL = 6/50
6/5 = 1.2
SCORE: 1.2
DR: No
Don’t worry…..This just how the level is made
I am making the rest
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Hey Sk8terboyJJ2
I said it’s only a show what the level looks like! I am continuing the episode![This review has been edited by Master Cheater]
Sk8terboyJJ2
Posted more than 20 years ago (edited 18 Jun 08, 17:45)
Removed my total faggotry from my younger self… excuse me for it.
spazz
Posted more than 20 years ago
Could’nt find tileset Battleships JJ1 or someting. Re-upload and include the tileset.