5
Music is really good, but these drums… you should put some others also, these ain’t good at high acord :P Some techno elements also aren’t good here.
And this moment at 1:24 … Well, there’s something strange in background.
In 1:29 this sounds like Polish :P Train a bit your english speaking :P
From 2:12 there isn’t this ear-hurting background. Good. Also this guitar fits well in melody.
And these dead-ends near 3:00. They aren’t good.
4:12-4:15 : this background hurts.
Ending ? CAN be… but.. ah.. well, nevermind.
Finally: If you would fix it a bit, it would be pretty good i promise :P
4
Have you no concept of keeping things in key?! Seriously! [cough] Sorry. . . Anyway. . .
Introduction:
“Sugar Rush!” theme from Jazz Jackrabbit 2 done in an apparent “trance” style.
Song Analysis:
This song hurts my head. Even turned down, this song hurts my head. Overall, it’s too darn loud. On some players, it even manages to drown itself out with sheer static. Additionally, the song — and yes, I realize how little there is to work with — is far too repeatitive. It’s the same thing over and over again with different samples. Out of tune ones.
Also, if I’m not mistaken, the song seems to lean heavily to the left speaker. This is unacceptable, considering there’s thirty-two freaking channels which could be mixed around properly. Remember, sometimes it’s better not to have something clear to the right, or clear to the left all the time. A little in-betweening could help.
Sample Analysis:
. . .Paul Reubens?
Anyway. . . The samples are out of key with one-another, as you may or may not realize. The samples themselves are alright, but the way they’re used just doesn’t work very well.
Final Analysis:
This is a horrible attempt at the Sugar Rush theme, but I can definately imagine worst tries.
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The “Simon Cowell” of Jazz 2 Online‘s Music Scene. . . Joseph Collins
“Dr Lithius” or “LithiuServer” on Jazz 2