Starting Comments
Finally! A new single player! I’ve been waiting for new downloads, since the J2O download section is practically dead.
Gameplay
After playing the first level (which was rather short), I noticed that you are a newcomer. No offence, it just looked like this would be your first level ever. Straight lines, things copied from other episodes and levels. The gameplay sucked throughout the game. Straight lines and shooting enemies… Sorry, but yawn.
Gameplay = Bad
Placements
No ammo, gems, powerups, and if there are enemies, they’re in straight lines and places you won’t bother watching.
Placement = Very bad
Story
Devan is back, he has come to destroy the world etc… Old story. We need new idea’s.
Story = Old
Balance
Way too easy to be an episode. Sorry, but this just plain sucks.
Balance = Very bad
Eyecandy
Flowers with exactly the same distances between them, moving background, waterfalls made of texture backgrounds… Nothing special.
Eyecandy = Not worth mentioning
Music
I personally like the music from the first level, but it doesn’t fit the level. Most levels didn’t have music (Or music included in the pack).
Music = Bad
Originality
Well, he DID have a trigger puzzle… =\ Also, there was this wide open space in which you needed to find the single-tile-wide exit…
Originality = Could be better
Score
I really don’t think you deserve any score higher than a 2. Just because I am nice, I’ll leave the rating blank. Use it wisely…
Score = N/A
Bonusses/substractions
Nothing worth mentioning (Although I like fact that you used Fawriel (Formerly known as Piccolo) his old tilesets.)
Added Score = N/A
Download Recommendation
No.
Further comment
If you want to make good episodes, think of a good idea. As for eyecandy and level layout, check the best downloads… =P