Airship…
Gameplay
This level has not got the flow I expected. In some parts there is allmost no flow as there are too many obstacles and in some parts there is just a huge gap with nothing. Speaking about gaps, when you leave the schip at the bottom, you just fall in something white at the bottom of the level and respawn {pits)but these pits seem to make this level more one wayed. To my experience, it also seems the blue team has some advantage accourding to how this level is designed.
Eyecandy
You did great for whatsoever you can do great with this title set. It does not really have a great eyecandy. The background is quite boring with some clouds and some moving spaceships which you can only see at some places. There is not really a foreground and the level looks quite black.
Originality
There are some mentionable things in your level, you made an entrance to the spaceship by ‘climbing’ up an anchor and you made a bonus warp which has the amount of coins in a text message which looks quite good. In the bonus part there are some chests which contain…shields! I think those shields give you a too great advantage, as players have to shoot you about two times as much to kill you, even if it is for only thirty seconds. I also got stuck somewhere where you could climb over some ropes and warp when you would fall, when I got on the spring I got right in the roof without touthing other buttons. Your level has some great features but it’s quality is decreased with the bugs it has.
Gameplay: 6
Eyecandy: 7
Originality: 7
Final Grade: 6.7