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Gameplay
Your level consists of some large platforms but there are also some small platforms floating arround, however you made them realistic by making them look broken-off. Playing this level requires a lot of thinking because you can only get throught the middle by using either a warp or a secret path. Too bad you only placed 3 (bounch) bullets at some places and more at other places.
Eyecandy
You made a good eyecandy, especially on the background. I miss some foreground-eyecandy though, the onliest I can find is the lava at the bottom which is camouflaging the pits. Try to (partly) camoufage some other parts of your level with foreground next time, it will look even nicer.
Originality
As you mentioned, people gave you idea’s for your level. I have to mention that these were mostly very great idea’s. Not only the pits are timed, there are also blocks which close some things off for a certain period of time and then dissapear for a certain period of time again. You could have done something more with the dead ends of this level, which have only either warps or sucer tubes.
Gameplay: 7.5
Eyecandy: 7
Originality: 8.5
Final Grade: 7.7
