Good level. I liked it.
The eyecandy was OK. There is much eyecandy which is good but in some
parts of the level it is a bit stiff and ugly, for example the RF room at the very top of the level.
Here and there I saw some eyecandy bugs. Look at 38,27 and 45,21 in JCS and you’ll see what I mean.
The ammo placement wasn’t too good. In my opininon there wasn’t enough ammo and to hard to get. You almost want the ammo to flow in automatically.
The layout on the other was very good. The only thing I can complain about is that there are ways out of the level where you can’t run becase the level ends there. It gets kind of unlogic. But that’s a matter of personality.
The level points to the wrong music file. It points to Xmas3.s3m but the song that follows in the TSF pack is named Xmas2.s3m.
If that isn’t the song you mean you should really upload the music file YOU mean.
Overall good level. Just be a little more careful and I think really good levels might come up from you.
ps. People like screenshots. Just press the buttom “print screen” while playing, paste it in paint and save it as jpeg. Then you have a screenshot to add!