first start with the bad things. there are loads of tilebugs in this level, and a sky is also badly made. the map is quite long but next time don’t put too much goodies and ammo. you also have to make the geometry more complex and improve the eyecandy. and lol always use english texts!
by the way the idea of this carrot jungle was ok for me. i know you can make it better. it was fun to play even it was a bit linear (: i gave it 4 points and i recommended it to try.
But you can do better!