Firstly thanks for reviewing.
I know that I build very simple and mostly bad levels :D
I’m really a beginner and I’m learning to build levels.
I just share them on J2O to get advices to make better levels. My plans are remaking those levels again later, using Your and other people’s advices.
Halloween Adventure
Single player, by Ja22 Jackrabbit,
requires 
The Secret Files with JJ2+
Description
NOTE: This is a very late upload of my Halloween project. :( I wasn’t able to upload it at Halloween, because of an error. So now please don’t look at the theme, just the level. Wish you a happy late-Halloween!
This is a small parkour-adventure level. It was very long to create it, please note I’m a beginner!!!
Contains 3 Files
 Halloween Adventure.txt |
0.62 kB | |
 Halloween Adventure.j2l |
Haunted House | 2.31 kB |
 Haunted.it |
Jazz Belmont | 712.19 kB |
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Ja22 17 Dec 2014, 10:55
Stijn 4 Jan 2015, 15:24
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To be honest, this looks like a typical “my first level” that shouldn’t really have been uploaded here. Everyone starts out like this – trying out various way to build platforms and buildings with tilesets, maybe adding a few enemies to see how they work, no textured background because you don’t know how that works yet.
My first single player level probably looked similar. I’m glad I never uploaded it to this site, because it really wasn’t good, and maybe that should’ve happened to this one too: let it stay on your hard drive, learn from it, play some other highly-rated single player levels, take inspiration from those, and create your next level that is actually fun to play and looks good. Maybe ask a few friends to play the level and tell you what they think, so you can change it based on their feedback and make it better before putting it out there for others to download and review. I’m sure your next levels will be a lot better if you do it like that!
As it is, this one is really not playworthy, though.
Bloody_Body 29 May 2015, 14:41 (edited 2 Apr 17, 12:10)
2
First of all this level doesn’t use Angel Script but you indicated it as TSF+. It’s a bit confusing. Additionally the game crushes each time you finish the level, as you forgot to enter the name of a next level or ending.
Layout 2/10
The level is small and simple, not challenging at all… You could place some boss here at least! The level’s properties are 300*64 but only a small part of this area is used, the greater part of a level is a pit you can easily fall in. Ugly square pieces of wall are hanged in the air instead of platforms. The enemies have random positions, the bats levitate in the air… The hard difficulty adds some bats to the level, wich is pretty useless.
Eyecandy 2/10
Have you ever played jigsaw puzzles in your childhood? The tiles are some kind of that, you should put them in a certain order to make a good-looking picture. The absence of this order ruins this level’s eyecandy. Houses are deprived of their frontal walls and look like huge flat cardboards… There is something looking like a colomn at the 1st layer-although this tileset has a normal colomn, you had built it with some random tiles! No background at all… I understand that Haunted tileset doesn’t have any proper background except for the sky, but even the sky isn’t used in this level.
Music 1/10
You’ve uploaded an original music file, but the JCS uses some “Halloween.mp3” so the game can’t load the music to this level.
Total rating: (2+2+1)/3=1.7
I don’t think it’s a good idea to upload levels to the site before you learn how to make them.
Probably you should open some original levels with JCS and analyse their structure, layers, events, music, properties, ect…
Primpy 16 Dec 2014, 07:37 (edited 21 Dec 14, 11:19)
Your map is simply bad.
Very simple, no details added.
Very few enemies.
Bat sleeping in the air.
You can get to the top of the house easier if you perform a double jump with Spaz or use Jazz’s special power.
No new music.
The tileset is matching, but you built it bad, with lots of errors.
You can fall off the map at the limit of the ground.
Nothing exciting about it, it’s just a map for 2 years old to complete.
I’ll give 8 for encouragement, but I’d really give it like 6.
Can’t reccomend it.
Edit: For being a jerk, I’ll go down to 7. Just because I made a honest review of your map (Which is way worse than mine, everybody can confirm that) that doesn’t mean you have to leave a bad review for my map. Face the truth, your vengence via rating my map doesn’t bother me.
Edit 2: Back to 8 since Stijn removed your nonsense review. If you feel offended, please download the map, give it a shot then write a serious review, as I did to yours.