Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

It is your first level and a lot could be improved.

No story.
0/0

Music: Basic castle music, fine. Not orginal though, but it fits well.
8/10

Eyecandy.
Well, rather basic. Not many tilebugs… if any. I didn’t observed the background but I didn’t found any in the foreground. The sole cucumber in that secret room with that sign made me laugh… especially because this level has so much food on every other damn spot in this level.
8,25/10

Gameplay:
Level layout.
This level was quite a bit like the Epic levels… but it was much shorter… way too short, in fact. It is playable with Spaz and Lori: Jazz can get through the level but can’t finish it because the blocks in the end cannot be destroyed without sidekick. The spikes work anyway.

The warp in the right side can be passed and that is a bad thing. Just put three of the same warps next to eachother to make this impossible. However, the entire right side was pointless in the end..

6/10

Enemy placement:
Rather bland and way too few enemies, on hard. It was by far not enough to kill me…

The Bats were well placed though.
6/10

Pickup placement:
Gem barrels/crates don’t need to be THAT full… sjeez. Way too many food; I got two sugar rushes in such a short level!
There was enough ammo; some toasters and some RF’s. Outside of a spring to defrost, the ammo was not necessary or even useful; the level is finished soon after so I didn’t had to use either of them. Especially because the spring isn’t even necessary to defrost… well.
5,5/10

Replay value:
None because the secrets are way too easy… everything was, in fact. No story, not much ammo, etc. Sorry, but nothing else as a:
1/10

34,75/60 / 6 = ~5,8/6

Penalties: Unplayable with Jazz. Despite the warning to NOT play this with Jazz as this was avoidable, I will give a -0,5 penalty here.
End Level bug (just put “ending” in next-level string if it is the last level in an episode): -0.5

4,8/10

DR: No.

Tips:
- Less food, really.
- More ammo early in the level, especially in levels as short as this one.
- More enemies.
- Make your levels at least three times larger unless it is an episode in which several levels can be as short as this one.
- Add a coin warp if coins exist in a level.
- Add orginal things in a level as long as it isn’t totally ridiculous.

I guess you used first castle level.
Anyway, level is good but short a bit, and a lot of foods.
Bat placement not bad, and I see 2 sugar rush!
I think can be developed.
~Narsist

Nice level :)

:D very cool lvls ;p

cool lvl :D

nice

wow!

gj

music just awesome XD

Doesn’t seems to work for me on wine _

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Great program, works fine on linux in wine. Too bad I can’t just click color I want instead of writing it manually – color samples you attached look like color palette so I thought it’s clickable xP. Another problem is that in-game colors not always come out exactly like on picture. But I still recommend it, it makes changing nickname/fur colors really easy. I’d rate 10 or so if not these two issues.

Quite a nice level of this kind. I see a lot of lacks though.

The only pickups are food, but it’s impossible to get a sugar rush. And even if it’d be possible, there are unfortunately no enemies nor an end boss. Too much sucker tubes, especially since they don’t use tubes tiles. The level could be yet longer and more ideas could be there. The eyecandy, while not bad, could be much better. Also the music, while it’s one of my favourites, doesn’t really fit the feel of the level.

Overally, a lot of things should be improved, but it’s not a bad level-which-plays-itself too. I can’t rate high, but I recommend downloading it.

good

good

ok

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This is good. =) I can’t do tilesets =(

[Review changed to quick review. ~cooba]

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is nice!! this looks like green hill zone tileset created by you.

[Review changed to quick review. ~cooba]

I don’t like 3d tilesets in 2d game

Very good and nice looking level: + 7.0
As I like rocket technology, you deserve more points: + 1.0
No bugs: + 0.5
Final score: 8.5
Nice one!

DL Recommended!

I hate the theme, tiles, but is so good for making levels and so easy to hand that I just can’t give 8 just because I don’t like the theme so that makes me give a 9 and DR(Download Reccomendation) . Thank to your tileset colours that made me give 5 from 9 points.

PS:p I gave the + 0.2 just because you deserve them and because you are such a great man in the J2O community. Be proud of you.