Jazz Jackrabbit 2 Online

Nice level, but it needs a bugfix and a bit of developments

[Review changed to quick review. – cooba]

Good. But somewhere need to improve.

[Review changed to quick review. – cooba]

Hi, Rapid!

EYECANDY
8.0

GAMEPLAY
7.8

PICKUPS
7.8

OVERALL
8.0
RATING: 8.0
DOWNLOAD?
yes

eye candy:
10!
gameplay:
9.8
originalty
10!

overall 10 :D

btw what is emp?

FLAG POSITIONS

Flag positions were greatly put …nice distance,good placement.

TILES

tiles were really well placed..nice.

BG

Background was good but when i get to a cretain part of the lvl,…it shows snow…how is that possible?

MUSIC

Fits the lvl really good.

DR

Well ….yes!

OVERALL

8.0

Cool

WoooooooooooooooW

[Review changed to quick review. – cooba]

Hmm 1st i want say awsome xD
eyecandy:9
i love water with trees soo :P
gameplay:9
i love the way how we run around xD
orignalty:8.0
very cool way to put seeks :P i love it!

so total:8.7 :D

Hmm….medium.

Gameplay

The playing of this level might be a little hard for less-skilled players, this is really a level where players who are better than their opponent have a good chance to win. The flow isn’t really that good, but that is compensated by the lay out of the level, which is actually marvelous. I’m not a big fan of pits, but the way they are embedded in the level, causes them to not be an obstacle, but a tool.

Eyecandy

Your background is very original. Instead of putting most the tiles at the bottom as most people do, you’ve put them at the top and created a real big thundercloud. Well done. Allso layer 5 is really well done and looks like it is connected to layer 3.

Originality

As been said before, you have a very original background. Also the layout of your level is completely uncommon. The way you’ve used the pits and the powerups is also nice. This level is theoretically really good, though I wonder how much there will be played here.

Gameplay: 8
Eyecandy: 9
Originality: 8.5

Final Grade: 8.5

It seems like this level deserves a decent review….

Gameplay

This level has a nice flow, this is because the distance between the celing and floor of the platforms here is just right, not too big and not too little. Though that is not the only cause. There appear to be a lot of sucers that suck you through walls. Allthough their destination is mostly obvious, I would recommend not to use so many of them, apply variation and use other events to get through the level, like float ups, wind, copters, swining vines or warps.
The ammo placement is quite good, though I have the feeling that the right side of the level contains more ammo. What is certain is that it contains more power ups, which makes the level a bit unbalanced.

Eyecandy

Maybe the background could have looked a bit more mystic, because it is just mist and woods, I miss the mysic feeling. Also the mountains look a bit too bald, maybe they could have been decorated some. This is the same for the body of the platforms on layer 4, it is mostly either stones or grassy earth. The decoration of the pathways however, has been done better. It has been decorated with plants, threes, rocks, flowers and, most important, demons, in different colors. Most of those things are on the foreground, though I still miss some larger objects on the foreground that overlap your view of your rabbit when passing.

Originality

As mentioned before, there should have been some variety of events in this level, I think this also goes for the eyecandy. This level gets boring fast because of the small presence of variety. Allthough the quality of this level is more than sufficient, it doesn’t give me a feeling of wanting to play it. Some original recognisable features should have been added to make it more than just a level. This level is good enough to be played on public servers sometimes.

Gameplay: 7.5
Eyecandy: 7.5
Originality: 7
Standard JJ2 music: -0.1

Final Grade: 7.2

Hi, Rapid

Good level :)

EYECANDY
7.0

GAMEPLAY
7.1

PICKUPS
7.5

OVERALL
7.5
RATING: 7.5
DOWNLOAD?
Yes!

EYECANDY
6.9
It can really be better. More for layers 1,2,3 and more in the background. You did a good job with the ship and rain but it can still be better.

GAMEPLAY
7.5
It really looks like semi. Good the blue base was fixed. There are some bugs.

PICKUPS
7.9
Good ammo placement. Not too campy,though the RF part can be.

OVERALL
7.4
It is good for a second CTF level. Try to be more original and fix the bugs. Hope the next one will be a lot better.

This is a good level for someone who isn’t that familliar with levelmaking yet.

Gameplay

This level doesn’t have a good flow, there are some dead ends and also paths of only a few tiles big. Though, you managed to keep the damage minimal by having a good flow in the middle of your level. Maybe you should try to make your next level a bit bigger, so it will be easier to avoid small paths and dead ends.

Eyecandy

My first impression of the eyecandy is good, you have a nice moving background and rain on the foreground, also you used some tiles to mask other tiles or events. Though this level contains quite a lot of tilebugs. Try to look at other levels and see how the authors of those levels used the tiles.

Originality

You used quite some events in your level, which allowed one to warp to powerups they can’t shoot and also roll through a sucer tube square. Though, this level lacks original design, amazing eyencandy and renewing combinations of tiles and events. Though for your second level this is a good job, you can be proud of it.

Gameplay: 5.5
Eyecandy: 5
Originality: 6

Final grade: 5.5

Well, it’s working for me and looks nice, but the ‘Choose a color’ buttons are not working. And too bad it’s only for 1.23.

minmay can u help me ? xD

Rather too similar to Happy Semiconductor for my tastes. I found the way the same tiles are on multiple layers to be rather confusing with regards to figuring out whether or not I can stand on something. Eyecandy is all right, but is rather messy and could be much improved.

GAMEPLAY

Gameplay was really good.There were some nice tiles in there.

ENEMIES

Very well-placed.

ORIGINALITY

9/0

BG

Fits the lvls really great!

MUSIC

Music really fit the lvl.

EVENT PLACEMENT

Very well done!

SINGLE PLAYER

Only two lvls are still good for a single player download.

LAYERS

Very well done!!nice tiles in Layer 2 and 5.

DR?

Yes!

OVERALL

9.0

Not a bad level. The atmosphere is quite good, yet nothing overly special. The issue I have with this level is that it tries a bit too hard to be like semi. At least it has two carrots, so it’s not quite as campy, but more chaotic due to being very small yet open. The eyecandy is okay. Might be fun, but I highly doubt it will become a classic.

Nice :D