Okay, I just wrote a quick review, and I thought that was pointless, so here’s a real review. Now you must always remember, I’m directing my review at you to give constructive criticism. This means I’m trying to provide information or hints as to what is wrong and what is right. I know I can’t be 100% correct, but bare with me, noone ever is.
Now that I’m done with my life-story, I will write a review.
Eyecandy
Rating: 8.2
This is usually the best part to review because you can point out everything that looks great. One great thing about this level is that the eyecandy doesn’t get in the way of the gameplay itself. The level has a typical textured green background with a nice fade in it. The other background layers didn’t really have anything special. Moving closer to the level itself, the level did have something quite original which probably has something in relation to the title. I spotted a demon was created using some times, you can spot a mouth and an eye and blahblah. If you run into its mouth, you’ll get some seeker ammo, and then get shot out afterwards. It feels like the demon itself is swallowing you. Also, the bases have quite nice eyecandy around them as there is nothing that looks extremely bland. The author clearly spent some time making it look good. Other than the “demon” I spotted, I didn’t really see much that was so special.
Many of the EC effects used are very typical in today’s standards of levels and the use of this tileset. I would have wanted to see possibly more demons or maybe Disguise’s head everywhere. Also, the level itself was flipped, I’ll never miss it if someone tries to do that, this usually causes shadows and tiles to look wrong as their directions change which would therefore change the origin of light in the level not that it is that important… Nonetheless, the eyecandy is still somewhat impressive in this level and is worth a look at; I didn’t spot any tilebugs (which really tick me off) which is great and the level itself did look quite pleasing.
Gameplay
Rating: 6.5
This might just be what’s bringing the level down so much. I’ll set this out accordingly: bias, strategy, layout, flow, defense/offense, and of course fun-factor.
The level itself isn’t biased from one team to another as it’s pretty much 100% symmetrical. One bias that I could complain about is that many of the jumps in this level are designed to be done with Spaz. The author clearly did not think too much about using Jazz in this level as many of the jumps are really annoying to pull off with him. This would probably deter anyone from playing as Jazz in this level.
The level itself doesn’t really have many tactical traits built into it, apart from the way you can blow people out of the base using seekers or shooting them with electro blasters which conveniently spawn on the side of the base. The carrot area and the powerups are generally very easy to camp with the exception of the +1 carrots and the RF PU. The seeker PU is easy to camp because of the excess in seeker ammo in the area, which would not only allow the person camping inside (should there be one) to shoot people warping in, but will also allow that player to shoot people moving from above. The only real way of striking back at a camper here is by shooting seekers from above. While this will probably knock them out, the gameplay itself is very disruptive like that and what would the attacker do if he lacked seekers? He could just warp in or go up and try to find some, but other players tend to hog weapons too. Maybe I’m being too critical. The other powerups (toaster and bouncer) are both in very annoying places, a small hole; while this might be a way of biasing the level in Jazz’s favor (which I highly doubt), it could also be a method of making players shoot the powerup instead of kicking. What I suggest is to either make it easier to kick, or make players have to shoot it with electro blaster or something. The Full NRG doesn’t have too much space to bombard it with RFs, and isn’t open enough to attack with bouncers and seekers, which would make this the ultimate camp-spot. There is no real strategy in order to remove the person who may be camping there other than to shoot seekers from a side and hope it hits them, which on a non-laggy server wouldn’t be very effective.
The layout of the level is very simple and quite platformy. Nonetheless it is quite easy to learn as the tubes and springs are quite easy to find. The level’s layout is quite well set out, minus the bases, I hate the bases. On top of the fact that I hate the bases (did I mention I hate the bases?), there are some random dead ends at the top, not that they are anything major, they can be annoying.
The level itself flows quite well as there aren’t any majorly annoying walls or platforms in which you run into or off very easily. The springs are quite well placed. But, some areas of the level itself are very annoying such as near the base area in particular; climbing out from the side of the base in the outdoor area can be very annoying as it requires you to jump from side to side to side to side to side. The water stops toasters from working properly when you run into it (probably by accident), while it does give you an easy boost for the RF climbing thing which you put into it under the base. (While I should have mentioned this in strategy…) The RF climbing will give you a quick boost to the base and can be an easy way in and out to avoid defenders.
In an attacker’s eyes, the base is very hard to reach without getting hit because of the vertical layout and the fact that the base is situated above the point of entry. This makes it even more hard to reach the base unhit. The fact that there is no way of shooting someone camping on the base unless from above with a seeker or electro blaster or bouncer (which they’ll have a chance to recover by the time you reach them) causes attacking to be very annoying in this level. Defense on the other hand is a whole other story. This level is layed out for easy defense in the base area in particular, as you just need either bouncers or seekers and the defense is pretty much solid already. It’s really hard not to hit the incoming attackers.
This level is quite bumpy, as some areas cause you to be very slow and some areas don’t have an affect on your speed much. The fact that the RF PU isn’t very useful for chasing in this level is quite a bummer (to me) as the level’s shape isn’t very straight horizontally, you also can’t really RF hop accross the level so much, but there is the one (not too useful) RF climb area which might just help if noone expects it. The movement in this level isn’t very fun and it isn’t as fast paced as I’d like it to be, but oh well.
General Placement
Rating: 7.0
The ammo is placed quite well in the level and nothing is really in the lacking, but I think there’s an excess in powerups. The fact that this level isn’t insanely huge and quite small in passageways makes me think that even three powerups in this level is pushing it. I’ll let that go. Anyway, none of the powerups are really too close to eachother which is good and the carrots are quite spread out too which is also great. The extra seeker ammo crates placed next to the seeker powerup is quite useless indeed as you’d usually do your special move, shooting would be useless as the crates would probably be in the way. The ammo is quite well placed nonetheless, the only thing I can probably ask for is more electro blasters. The carrots are all well placed. Yeah. Well done.
Originality
The level itself doesn’t have many excessively original gameplay gimmicks or eyecandy concepts with the exception of the “demon” eyecandy. Well done on that as that does relate to the level’s name quite well and creates quite the mood.
One point for originality (though that isn’t really included in rating).
Conclusion
Finally, the best part of the review. Nice level, it’s quite impressive but it does have it’s flaws. Well done on this level, and I reccomend downloading this level as it’s worth looking at.
Nice. Good job, the feel was great.
Great job turning Battle2 into a CTF! :D
I love it!
The text events are also hilarious! :D
The eyecandy is very good i give You 10/10
Weapons = Brilliant arrangement but i give 9/10
Game Play = Nice lvl, i like it and cool place to full car ;] 10/10
Total i give You 10
[Review changed to quick review. – cooba]
Eyecandy:
Great. I didn’t see any bugs. Nice background GJ
10/10
Gameplay:
Well, it’s hard lvl :D. Only one way to get flag. To easy to defend bases. You should delete that springs is bases.
9/10
Weapons:
4 PUs is too many to that lvl size. 3 cars was good idea (one full NRG).
9/10
Total Score: 28/30
28 : 3 = 9.(3)
Well, i’ll get you 9.5
[Review changed to quick review. – cooba]
Agree with Jimy
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Well there are 3 carrots, and 4 pus, we played here today and lvl it’s better than i expected
[Review changed to quick review. – cooba]
Great Eyecandy. It’s very nice CTF lvl in Carrottus1. I like that tileset. Simetric level is good idea.
Eyecandy: 6/10
Gameplay: 7/10
Ammo/Cars: 6/10
Total Score: 7
[Review changed to quick review. For more information, see Review Rules. ~cooba]
This is a nice idea but it is not executed very well.
EYECANDY
Most of the eyecandy in the original Battle1,2 and 3 levels is still present. There is a new background with the castle pillars and the Tubelectric “EPIC” speakers. It does look good but not there isn’t really much originality in the way of eyecandy. Try adding more of your own instead of just using the original.
5/10
GAMEPLAY
You start off the level in a room where you can choose which Battle level you want to play in. But this is where the problems begin. For starters, if you were playing a Duel you would have a hard time finding the opponent because they might be in one of the other levels and the combined size of all the levels is HUGE!
This would be OK if you had say 6 or more players.
4/10
WEAPONS & ITEM PLACEMENT
All of the original weapons and items from the original Battle levels are still present. Seeker PU is still too campy. Nothing has really changed with the weapon and item placement.
The campy Water Shield is still present.
There are 2 Seeker PUs since they are still in both Battle1 & 3 which is too much because you can gain Seeker ammo too easily.
You should have tried to change the placement of weapons and not make them too campy.
3/10
TOTAL SCORE: 12/30
OVERALL MARK = 12 / 3 = 4.0
DOWNLOAD?
While the idea and concept of this level is good it is just not executed very well. Also, since the level is TSF only, not everyone can play it.
So, no download recommendation. :(
Please do not re-upload this again :P Anyway, the first level by Dodges, it’s a quite nice symmetrical CTF-level using Carrotus 1.
Let’s start with the event placement. Two Full NRG’s (they are well placed) and 3 PU’s (seeks, bouncy and RF). They are well spread, so you must use the whole level, which is always a good thing. There are also two coinwarps, leading to the Seek PU-room. There are plenty of coins, which is good, so the PU is easy accessible, I really like it. The ammo shapes are boring, only squares or lines. The ammo choise is okay, I guess. Make the shapes more original next time, please.
Now the eyecandy. You used layer 3 quite well. You used the ‘brown cave’-tiles on layer 4, used layer 5 and 7 for background. Maybe next time use layer 6 and 7 instead and use layer 5 for more background. Anyway, there’s enough EC in this level, except some parts (like the lower corners) which feel really empty. You removed the minor bugs (GJ) and I really like the plants in the walls, it adds a bit more color. And yes, you changed the textured background (which is good), but I don’t like it green :P.
The gameplay is nice. You can reach the bases in 3 ways, but only leave them in one way, which might be in a problem. The ammo is okay, still, this level feels Spaz-biased. It’s hard to reach certain platforms with Jazz (if you don’t believe me, try it). There is enough ammo for this size level, two Full NRG’s and 3 PU’s are okay as well. Some things, like treestomps and giant carrots aren’t really good for the flow, but the flow is okay in the rest of the level.
Still, the level seems a bit ‘normal’, nothing special. Anything, there’s nothing wrong with that, I think it will play well and it’s really good for a first level. Keep up the good work!
That makes it unzip to a directory called Insomniac Carrots in your JJ2 directory, and that’s something which we generally don’t want.
[Misinformation fix. ~cooba]
Please don’t put the files inside a folder in the zip.
The level feels kind of generic, which is unsuprising for a level made with this tileset. The gameplay is fairly smooth, although the bases are far too easy to defend. No real problems with the eyecandy, but I don’t really think this music fits. In general, this is a fairly decent, but pretty bog standard CTF level.
Best CTF level by FS in my opinion. Very original too.
~BS7
[Review changed to quick review. For more information, see Review Rules. – cooba]
WOW! What a great level! Perfectly strategical, with an original theme makes it the best level yet in my opinion.
~BS7
What Bluespaz said.
Introduction
It’s been a while since I reviewed but I promised PurpleJazz to review his pack. This pack was going to have 5 levels at first, but it seems the author didn’t want to make another level.
Gameplay
The levels in this pack are all unsymmetrical. The layouts of the levels are a bit experimental, but there’s nothing really wrong with them. The levels don’t have some random platforms, but they are well planned. I think that Sunken Realm has the best layout, but Altitude Terrace and Evening Shades have good layouts too and some new concepts. Doomed Citadel is not bad either, but it can’t compete with the other three levels. People might call Altitude Terrace confusing at first because it’s not easy to learn. A nice concept used is that in Sunken Realm you start with a Gun8 Power-Up.
Eye candy
In my opinion the level with the best eye candy is Altitude Terrace because it uses all layers and the layers have lots of stuff. The other levels also have good eye candy.. it’s pretty original in some places. Sunken Realm uses Mystic Isle II, which hasn’t been used before the old one got updated. It has a nice background with a translucent layer 6. It didn’t crash me though. There is enough eye candy in the walls and also on places where you can actually go.
Placement of stuff
The ammo placement in the levels is nice, with some quite good shapes. I think some people might think there is not enough ammo, especially at the right side in Evening Shades. That level has a Full NRG on an interesting place, a RF PU that’s not very easy to get, and fly carrots. Sunken Realm has a Full NRG and a +1 carrot and they are close to each other. Nothing really wrong here.
Further comments
Because these levels have some original concepts they might not be very competitive. However, I think Sunken Realm can be a good level to play in. These levels are good to host in so-called ‘Random Levels’ but I think they’re more than that. It’s unfortunate that this pack only has four levels, but they’re really good. A CTF fan should download this, they’re well-known for some people already but I’m sure that there are still enough people that don’t have the levels yet.
Cool lvl! :)
~BS7
Bleh, not good. :/
Too many obstacles = not good for race
~BS7
One thing to say – THE EC IS AWESOME!
It’s just a shame that the layouts are way too simple.
~BS7
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