DX You say in this revieuw
Very much bugs
You have beta test it
have you told there how many bugs there?
if you have told that he makes it verry better
PHT.. your not the 1e who revieuw
Eh! You are Unfair! When the Second version of a tileset has got more blox and extras and music it can`t have a lower rating than the First version! That`s unfair!
And: A Example level is ONLY there for explaining you how to use! (So because it names EXAMPLE LEVEL)…..
IT MUST MIND. HAVE A 5.9[This review has been edited by sonictth]
YAIH! I am the first person to review this :-)
So let’s begin with the review.
GAMEPLAY/DESIGN:
Gameplay was really simple, mostly you have to kill enemies. The idea with that spiky trees after the savepoint was good. Carrot field was not a bad idea. The rest was really standard. But niek has done one of the things you NEVER should do in SP (or some other game mode): NEVER MAKE PARTS WHERE THE PLAYER FALL ON SOMETHING THAT HURTS AND MUST WAIT UNTIL HE IS KILLED! Don’t do this. That was made on a thing with carrots you must jump on. I fell in 2 times, at the second a cheated jjfly and flew out ;-p
Another comment: You can’t play with Lori :-[
PROS: Okay gameplay for your first try.
CONS: The spike trap where you can’t get out
Rating: 5.0
TILESET/TILESET USE:
The tileset used was the easter one. The eyecandy was more like standard eyecandy. Not amazing but not bad. I still notized some tile bugs. use more layers! There wasn’t any textured background, only a sky texture.
PROS: Okay tileset use.
CONS: No textured background, tile bugs, not amazing
Rating: 5.0
WEAPON/ITEM/ENEMY PLACEMENT:
There wasn’t much ammo, only a bit bouncers and too seeker crates. Also the items were set really sparse. For example: You don’t need the gems because there isn’t a nxt level. (if you don’t know it, if you find 100 gems in the nxt level you get an extra life). Also there wasn’t 100 of them. You don’t need the coins because there wasn’t any bonus room (or was there any?). There isn’t enough food to get a sugar rush. Also the enemy placement was weird. For example: Don’t put enemys on blocks that hurts Jazz (spikes,…) That looks weird because they don’t have any effect to the enemies. Also DON’T let people fall on enemies they can’t see below. Use the event ‘Stop Enemy’ to stop enemies (Gameplay/modifier/Stop enemy). If they walk over this event they will go back.
PROS: the three tuf mans at the end were a little bit fun.
CONS: Weird enemy placement, sparse ammo, gems and food.
Rating: 2.0
REPLAY/FUN FACTOR/ORIGINALITY:
Hmm…..I don’t feel like playing this again :-(. Sorry but it isn’t much fun. The carrot field and the spiky trees was a bit original but not much. Think of new things. For example ‘The Demon Invasasion’ from Moonblaze is a very original episode o_0
PROS: spiky trees, tuf mans
CONS: not really much fun factor
Rating: 4.0
OVERALL:
Not really amazing. Just make original things, longer levels and better eyecandy. But I see a bit talent. Make more levels.
PROS: okay eyecandy
CONS: bad item/weapon/enemy placement, no fun…etc
FINAL RATING: 4.0
because you are new at level making and I am nice I’ll change the rating in
5.0 :-)
DOWNLOAD RECCOMENDATION: No
PHT
To 007: Yes I see now but as I begun my review there wasn’t any, maybe the first was under construction :-)
And then I forgot to edit mine :-p[This review has been edited by PHT]
Wow! This is great!
It has alot of enemys, some food, and carrots put in the perfect place!(eggseration intended)
The only thing that kinda was weird was the only name in the credits was: Satan
otherwize great!
9
This tileset was preaty good.
I liked how every thing glowed…..8o
But since it was made in Ms paint it will get points docked.
Since in the lvl it asked for sugestions Ill give you some:
Make a better bg :P
If you make tilesets in MS paint,When you make lines like in the grond or whereever try to make them have a graident.
THose were some tips that I thinbk might help, I hope.
ALL IN ALL:4
If you’re going to make an edit of battle 1, make it… hey, wait, don’t make one at all, unless you’re getting rid of the shield or making it so if it’s a laggy server that doesn’t have respawn.exe, you can get up to the fast fires, and the deleted shield without using a copter (I did this once). Anyway, all this does is put a spring somewhere, that shoots you to the stop of the level, where there is just a bunch of linear and ugly areas covered up by layer 3. I’m taking off points to begin with because it’s an edit. This is awful, though.
Eyecandy – Bad
At least there’s a background… the sprite layer and layer 3 eyecandy suck too bad, though.
Gameplay: Very bad
Yuck. Jazz can barely get around it, and Spaz has a hard time, too.
Flow: Very bad
Bad flow… spring placement sucks.
Ammo: Very bad
This is the first ‘very bad’ ammo placement I’ve issued. This is pretty darn bad.
Layout: Very bad
goes in the bathroom and comes out an hour later weighing 10 pounds less, then eats for the next day non-stop to gain the weight back
Download reccomendation: No.
Host this often: No.
Overall: No. Very bad. Try harder next time, and focus on the gameplay. No offense to your beta testers, but have people who are good at level making test your levels, because if you take advice from someone whose not good, what good is the advice?
Read my review for the first one. It’s basically the same.
The only difference here is that there are some new tiles, none of that are particularly useful.
I’m not adding anything for the trees glowing, because that was unintentional of you.
Water in 8bit does NOT work; I don’t know what you’re talking about.
Anyway, my review is the same as the one for version 1, but since there are new tiles, I’ll give you +.2 points because I’m nice.
:| lutijn…
1-assault?!??
2-very much bugs.
3-boring
4-you cant get up ( lori mayby jazz to )
5-Boring gameplay.
6-Bad eyecandy, only at the fourgrond and layer 7 i think….
an 7.2?!?!? wow.
an 6.5 from me.
next time lissen to me.
make the bugs fixt!
and the size is oke…
lutijn is very bad at betatesting!
oke, an 6.5 from me.
[This review has been edited by dx dc]
Hmm, good work, i think you have made this with normal paint, better then the first version, much better its bigger and better, a 7!
Hmm, this level is not good/bad.
I think you must use the whole level for CTF likes one base above and one down, under you never must come to score! this level you can use for Battle to, i think..
::For all of this a nice 7.2!::
Trafton: Rating removal.[This review has been edited by Trafton AT]
Wee, first review! :D
gets buried in rotten veggies
Ok, ok… Enough with the cliché, time for a review update:
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Considering this is made in MS Paint (yes, the infamous program which a reputation of having made bright, limited colored sets), the colors are actually nicely done, which scores extra points in my book. Unfortunately, that’s all there is. The tileset itself is pretty basic, as mentioned in earlier reviews, with just ground, blocks, and some signs. No background, eye candy, nothing to increase the appeal of a level, aside from a bone in the ground, but that’s it: nothing. The example level only shows you how you can use the set and some facts about it.
On an interesting note, I’ve read the readme (as always, reviewers should make a habit of that, there is a point to making them. Heck, even the name of the zip file says you should read it) and it was all about how he got inspiration, how he loved 24… And it says he can draw well, he even drew mangas (Japanese comics for the unknowing). I believe that if he had the proper tools, he could become like Agama, but that’s just me :p
Verdict:
Back to the set. Overall, the rating is on a borderline, just because of the good colors in Paint (I’m a sucker for those, I know). The only thing I can do is suggest these things: get a free copy of Paint Shop Pro somewhere, it works much better than Paint. Secondly, take a good look at tilesets of others (I suggest Agama, Disguise and Blade), especially at the eye candy they put in. I can only give it a 5, because I’m nice :)
- JelZe GoldRabbit =:3
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Update: Sonictth is well underway it seems, he added (color) animations and water blocks (normally animated) in this set (color animation mean that the colors in the animation keep switching hue or brightness, something Jazz 1 used a lot, because it’s easy to do :P). Tho the additions are not revolutionary, they’re ok (Remember, this is in MS Paint ;P) and Sonictth deserves points for trying. He also updated the example level with the new animations, a “Boulder Coaster” (one thing: Jazz has trouble running up slopes steeper than 45 degrees, keep that in mind), and some new music (Sweet Dreams by Elwood, I’m starting to look like Aiko! o.o).
Updated Verdict:
Pretty Ok, but misses some stuff (Like destructive blocks, and in a Jungle set, vines must be in it! What’s a Jungle without vines? :P). The new rating from me: 6 One more thing: work on your english as well as on your set ;)
- JelZe GoldRabbit =:3[This review has been edited by JelZe]
???
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whats dis?!
dis suxs.
an 3.7 from me.
1-ther is stupid things changed.
2-its nothing.
dont do dis again dis is very bad bad bad!
Partybunny..
this cant be an 8.0 of ppl says that it is
ugly i think that trafton remove the raiting
COOOOL! HOW U CAN DRAW SO GOOD WITH MSPAINT.EXE???
(Rating removal. Please justify your rating in the future. Additionally, this was also not done with MSPAINT.EXE. -Trafton)[This review has been edited by Trafton AT]
I KNOW I WANT ASK ADMINS TO DELETE THIS!!!!!1
Nothing special – another short and horrible level. Too many enemies and bosses. You didn’t good level this time.
I want download it but i can’t find it
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